The Broken Journey - Prologue

Hey gang!

As I continue my journey in writing, I want to start getting feedback from more of you as I am drafting stories. This week, I'm looking to get some perspectives on the prologue of The Broken Journey, the first novel of a series. I plan to publish the book sometime this the spring.

Read the short prologue on the survey below and give me your feedback, or click on this link for the mobile reading version, a more comfortable experience on your phone or tablet.

Thank you in advance, I hope you enjoy what you read!